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Mute
You carried me
Over the shoulders
Of your emotional
Output.
Resonating
In sympathy
With the
Slope
Of my weakness.
While
Bearing the brunt
Like a
Wholehearted
Mute||
Wallowing
In the ferocity
Of your smile.
Taking us
Both
Under again.
And you carried me...
Over the shoulders
Of your emotional
Output.
Resonating
In sympathy
With the
Slope
Of my weakness.
While
Bearing the brunt
Like a
Wholehearted
Mute||
Wallowing
In the ferocity
Of your smile.
Taking us
Both
Under again.
And you carried me...
Published 13th Oct 2018
| Edited 2nd Dec 2018
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13th Oct 2018 12:26pm
Love the short lines ... crisp line breaks ... powerful distilled write Nari ... excellent ...
Nari, this poem reads like an emotional journey of love filled intimacy which empowers women and takes the reader into a passionate realm where sex becomes oh so a political expression of sisterhood in which women carry each other while walking the obstacle course of patriarchy..
John
John
14th Oct 2018 3:54am
