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Charred PT 2

The boy let the lighter fall from his grasp.
Feelings of mischief and excitement.
The world in front lit up.
The fire spreading quick and savagely.
The house screamed and creaked as it was consumed.
The boy backed slowly away, admiring the beast he has ignited.
Piercing screams sound suddenly from within.
The boy grins thinking the sound melodious and satisfying.
He watches as a being flings itself from the fire.
Writhing and contorting  
Hoarse whines and screeches
The boy awakes forced from his memories by the agonizing pain
The boys back now flat against the ground.
As the blackened and charred being presses ever harder.
The boys skin festering and blistering.
Slowly darkening and cracking.
The boys face burnt in agonizing fissures.
Written by Deathnadders
Published | Edited 23rd Oct 2018
Author's Note
Not sure how well I did on this part but I'm mostly satisfied with it.
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