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buried? read the epitaph
yes
buried here
is only the man
and what was
his weight
not
his wait
that
is still alive
same as
it
always
was
constant.
Published 5th Oct 2018
Author's Note
story
of wait
..eternal
of wait
..eternal
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5th Oct 2018 2:26pm
6th Oct 2018 9:05pm
welcome
is the Friend Admired
welcome
is the generous
and kind
review!!
welcome always
is your presence dear friend!!
appreciation
beyond words
is the Friend Admired
welcome
is the generous
and kind
review!!
welcome always
is your presence dear friend!!
appreciation
beyond words
Anonymous
5th Oct 2018 3:06pm
Always love your contemplative writing, Cold One!
Thank you!
MZ.
Thank you!
MZ.
6th Oct 2018 9:26pm
always
welcome
your presence
as well as your
beaut reviews my bro!!
thank you
beyond words!!
:-)
welcome
your presence
as well as your
beaut reviews my bro!!
thank you
beyond words!!
:-)
5th Oct 2018 10:28pm
Intense. If you like rock music at all, perhaps give a listen to, "Randy Described Eternity" by Built to Spill.
6th Oct 2018 9:30pm
welcome
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the review, the honor
yes, i don't mind rock music. And why thank you re the beaut recommend. It's hard to get out of both the ear and the head that song. :-)
appreciate immensely
the honor
the visit
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the review, the honor
yes, i don't mind rock music. And why thank you re the beaut recommend. It's hard to get out of both the ear and the head that song. :-)
appreciate immensely
the honor
the visit
Anonymous
5th Oct 2018 11:49pm
Great write fella. Problem (a Troubled problem believe me) you probably waiting at the wrong place! Promise you bouquet of poetic roses, then you look in the garden and the roses have stopped growing. Just my take on things.
6th Oct 2018 9:33pm
Welcome
dear Poet Admired!
Welcome
is the review generous, kind and
awesome!
well i guess, the problem, the word 'problem' IS the one word description for the life of the idiot mentioned in the scribble! :-)
appreciate
the visit
the review
immensely
dear Poet Admired!
Welcome
is the review generous, kind and
awesome!
well i guess, the problem, the word 'problem' IS the one word description for the life of the idiot mentioned in the scribble! :-)
appreciate
the visit
the review
immensely
12th Oct 2018 12:38pm
Your poems and comments reveal not only a lack of idiocy,
but also an abundance of humility.
It is your astute observations of life and the human condition
that continues to draw those wishing to learn to your page, my friend.
Only an idiot would think otherwise. :-)
but also an abundance of humility.
It is your astute observations of life and the human condition
that continues to draw those wishing to learn to your page, my friend.
Only an idiot would think otherwise. :-)
22nd Oct 2018 10:57am
:-)
my graceful Sis!
welcome
is your honoring
and heartening presence
and welcome
is your bestowing of honor!
humbled
is the scribbler here!
appreciation
mad and intense!
:-)
my graceful Sis!
welcome
is your honoring
and heartening presence
and welcome
is your bestowing of honor!
humbled
is the scribbler here!
appreciation
mad and intense!
:-)
