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You
You were icy cold
Hard
As a rock
I was fire on the inside
Uncontrolably
Moving toward you
You couldn’t resist
Insight
We touched
I got to your core
Melting you up
Making you flow
You boiled
At the end
You exstinguished me
Making flame by flame
Dissapear
And you volatilized
You won attack
Now I'm cold
And you
Hot as hell
And I know
It will
Take some time
For my heart
Again to heat up
Hard
As a rock
I was fire on the inside
Uncontrolably
Moving toward you
You couldn’t resist
Insight
We touched
I got to your core
Melting you up
Making you flow
You boiled
At the end
You exstinguished me
Making flame by flame
Dissapear
And you volatilized
You won attack
Now I'm cold
And you
Hot as hell
And I know
It will
Take some time
For my heart
Again to heat up
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Re. You
2nd Oct 2018 9:17pm
Great write ... I love the reversal here ... the ebb and flow of relationships ... how things can be out of sync ...
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2nd Oct 2018 9:31pm
Re. You
2nd Oct 2018 11:40pm
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3rd Oct 2018 9:02am
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3rd Oct 2018 9:04am
Re. You
3rd Oct 2018 9:09am
I'm pretty cold...dark on the inside...
Excellent...you express your emotions very well.
Excellent...you express your emotions very well.
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Re: Re. You
3rd Oct 2018 7:35pm
Darkness mysteriously attracts
I'm unfortunately like a night storm with lightnings
Thank you.
I'm unfortunately like a night storm with lightnings
Thank you.
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3rd Oct 2018 7:38pm
Re. You
3rd Oct 2018 9:57pm