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My elixir
I wrap my lips around you
And inhale
Fill my lungs with your poison
And exhale
My lips become numb
As I breath out
My problems and doubt
To which I will never succumb
The smoke
Swirls around inside of me
Freeing me from the demons
That so often make me choke
You're killing me
I'm dying
But as you can see
I feel like I'm flying
And inhale
Fill my lungs with your poison
And exhale
My lips become numb
As I breath out
My problems and doubt
To which I will never succumb
The smoke
Swirls around inside of me
Freeing me from the demons
That so often make me choke
You're killing me
I'm dying
But as you can see
I feel like I'm flying
Published 1st Oct 2018
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1st Oct 2018 9:16pm
I'm feeling this write. I remember what it was like to feel the warmth of smoke swirling in the lungs.
2nd Oct 2018 3:52pm
My camera will be taken away if I smoke again so have to just write about it
2nd Oct 2018 5:49pm
Nothing wrong with writing about what you desire most at a particular moment. A camera is a wonderful tool to keep handy, don’t lose it. Lol
2nd Oct 2018 7:36pm
Wonderful seductive write ... I'm smoking again ... loving it ... hating myself ...
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