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One more bottle
I sit here
With another fucking bottle
All rage
My mind at full throttle
No escape
From your own damned mind
Just madness
When you're focused on behind
Can’t forget
Every stupid little mistake
Still stuck
With all this shit you take
No release
Just ever growing madness
Overflowing
With complete and utter sadness
Here I sit
Just one more fucking bottle.
With another fucking bottle
All rage
My mind at full throttle
No escape
From your own damned mind
Just madness
When you're focused on behind
Can’t forget
Every stupid little mistake
Still stuck
With all this shit you take
No release
Just ever growing madness
Overflowing
With complete and utter sadness
Here I sit
Just one more fucking bottle.
Published 21st Sep 2018
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- Edited 21st Sep 2018 10:58pm
21st Sep 2018 10:57pm
Wow this resonates so deeply within me. Great great write, Rjm
21st Sep 2018 11:04pm
Anonymous
21st Sep 2018 11:06pm
Oh yes so right you are.
23rd Sep 2018 00:15am
Wow, did this one resonate...only that damn bottle but to escape other heartache. Wonderfully written my friend!
23rd Sep 2018 7:03am
Thanks Pandora, it's a shame that it does resonate, I should hope that no body else suffers the same - but misery likes company.
