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Needle Captive
I know that you know
where she is
shes family
we miss her
she needs you to let her go
just let her go
Shes ours
not yours
you dont need her the way we do
shes only 23
leave her be
needle captive
please let her be free....
where she is
shes family
we miss her
she needs you to let her go
just let her go
Shes ours
not yours
you dont need her the way we do
shes only 23
leave her be
needle captive
please let her be free....
Published 9th Sep 2018
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9th Sep 2018 5:40am
Anonymous
9th Sep 2018 11:59am
Very powerful write. Reflections of a mirrored pain. The reality of reason over addiction is not something that regards only the addicted but also everyone around. Very good metaphors and personification of the needle and the drug. Indeed it is a painful picture. Hugs. J
9th Sep 2018 6:34pm
it is a powerful expression, a plea
from the heart of those who care...
sad...indeed.
from the heart of those who care...
sad...indeed.
