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Hands
The first time you met him
Radiating sex appeal
That laugh
That body
Those hands
Hands can do so much
So much more
More than any cock
Can even try
The fantacy
So much better
Than reality
There is a dark secret
That lies within him
Unsavory and bent
I can tell
By the way he uses his hands
Not only for pleasure
But for lessons
Well taught
In the mirror
Of a black eye
Radiating sex appeal
That laugh
That body
Those hands
Hands can do so much
So much more
More than any cock
Can even try
The fantacy
So much better
Than reality
There is a dark secret
That lies within him
Unsavory and bent
I can tell
By the way he uses his hands
Not only for pleasure
But for lessons
Well taught
In the mirror
Of a black eye
Published 3rd Sep 2018
Author's Note
They arn't always what they seem
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Wow! The beauty and the brutality. Incredible flow to this right up to the disturbing conclusion. I comment only for the sake of your bravery in this piece and the execution in which you have delivered it. I only support soft hands.
4th Sep 2018 7:14am
Thanks so much Tenderloin
Ive never had a hand touch me like that, more of a metaphor really.
It is a struggle for so many thou.
#Pixel
Ive never had a hand touch me like that, more of a metaphor really.
It is a struggle for so many thou.
#Pixel
The best ones are the ones that shine through with honest truth
Oft we live with dark thoughts so we assume always with dark thoughts when maybe its not the case
Thus overlooking, avoiding, hiding & moving on to another more "darkened soul"
Yes there are some horrid individuals out there
I was witness to it only yesterday whilst driving seeing a woman getting kicked to the ground whilst he held their child in his arms
Interesting write
Enjoyed it 😊☺
Oft we live with dark thoughts so we assume always with dark thoughts when maybe its not the case
Thus overlooking, avoiding, hiding & moving on to another more "darkened soul"
Yes there are some horrid individuals out there
I was witness to it only yesterday whilst driving seeing a woman getting kicked to the ground whilst he held their child in his arms
Interesting write
Enjoyed it 😊☺
4th Sep 2018 7:22am
Thanks Rose,
Those dark thoughts can turn into really fun time with the right person. Wink wink
😊
Those dark thoughts can turn into really fun time with the right person. Wink wink
😊
4th Sep 2018 7:43am
