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The author encourages honest critique.
2nd Sep 2018 5:39am
Dump the guilt. What happened is what happened. Stay in the here and now. Good writing. Keep it up.
buddhakitty.
buddhakitty.
2nd Sep 2018 5:37pm
I'm a mother of 9 and counting
I eat guilt for breakfast
but apart from all the accusing voices
One stands out clear
"This is my beloved daughter
In whom I am well pleased"
Of all the shallow guilts I have
Not one is black
Like sin
I eat guilt for breakfast
but apart from all the accusing voices
One stands out clear
"This is my beloved daughter
In whom I am well pleased"
Of all the shallow guilts I have
Not one is black
Like sin
2nd Sep 2018 5:01pm
2nd Sep 2018 5:38pm
