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Defeat, the dish

Bite of my defeat
A dish more savory than
fruit of apathy

Written by EdibleWords

Published 31st Aug 2018

#courage #senryu

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Re. Defeat, the dish

31st Aug 2018 00:59am

A tasty read. Well thought out.

buddhakitty.

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31st Aug 2018 1:54am

Thank you! I'm honored to have your feedback. :)

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Re. Defeat, the dish

- Edited 31st Aug 2018 8:45am

31st Aug 2018 1:12am

Epigramatic senryu - what more can anyone ask for

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31st Aug 2018 2:12am

Yes, and you just schooled me! Thanks!

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Re. Defeat, the dish

31st Aug 2018 6:41am

In short, do nothing get nothing.

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