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ABSENT-MINDED

I pulled on a thread
for a long time
that turned out
to be a vein

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 30th Aug 2018

#SelfHarm

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Re. ABSENT-MINDED

30th Aug 2018 7:00pm

Horrifying image! But something that many can relate to nowadays.

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30th Aug 2018 7:02pm

Thank you. I very rarely write poems this dark, but I do absolutely adore things that are creepybeautiful.

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Re. ABSENT-MINDED

30th Aug 2018 7:09pm

I can't speak. Wow!

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30th Aug 2018 7:10pm

Thank you. Hearing exclamations like this, prompted by my words, makes me feel so good to be a poet.

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Re. ABSENT-MINDED

1st Sep 2018 7:32am

wow, brilliant image my friend and deeply touching. i salute you

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1st Sep 2018 2:51pm

Thank you JoySeeker

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