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Starry Sky
I wonder as I stare up at the magical stars above me,
My place of reflection as I pray to
clearly see
I've always said your heart was so sweet and truly pure,
The tragic romantic, a mad heart alike, I'm so very sure
Never to waste such passion in places so unworthy,
The type to make love under a million stars so otherworldly
More than lust alone would linger in one to have you,
A soul in which a girl easily falls in love with to be true
Tonight do I sit and stare to wish upon a single star,
Left longing all while you look to the same sky from afar
More than our naked bodies beneath them to be known,
A touch, a kiss, two yearning souls and minds interwoven
Oh do I wish you were here just so I could then see,
If finding love under the sky is just as I thought it to be
My place of reflection as I pray to
clearly see
I've always said your heart was so sweet and truly pure,
The tragic romantic, a mad heart alike, I'm so very sure
Never to waste such passion in places so unworthy,
The type to make love under a million stars so otherworldly
More than lust alone would linger in one to have you,
A soul in which a girl easily falls in love with to be true
Tonight do I sit and stare to wish upon a single star,
Left longing all while you look to the same sky from afar
More than our naked bodies beneath them to be known,
A touch, a kiss, two yearning souls and minds interwoven
Oh do I wish you were here just so I could then see,
If finding love under the sky is just as I thought it to be
Published 28th Aug 2018
| Edited 23rd Oct 2019
Author's Note
Only edited to add a picture. I'd never rearrange my cheesy lines, they're a part of me!
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28th Aug 2018 5:10pm
so romantic full of atmosphere, dripping like starlight on a warm night...very nice
28th Aug 2018 5:43pm
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28th Aug 2018 11:36pm
Anonymous
28th Aug 2018 9:10pm
Now I see another side of your soul, my dear. The romantic side. The side that dreams of young love, like a young girl at her first crush. It's so pure and full of hope. You have put a smile on my face and it's not usual these days. Very well done. Hugs J.
28th Aug 2018 11:38pm
I am truly the hopeless romantic with a dirty mind in every way. Thank you so much for that, it makes my heart happy to bring a smile!!
Anonymous
28th Aug 2018 11:42pm
You know I love a dirty mind. Mine is pure filth. So don't worry about it. I haven't found a person that can beat my perverted thoughts. Keep going. I'll be waiting for more. ;) :) lol! Hugs J
29th Aug 2018 1:58am
Haha..I don't mind a perverted mind one bit. That's why I loved your last piece so much;)
Waiting on the dirty mind to come back out and give me words..hopefully it will soon!:(
Waiting on the dirty mind to come back out and give me words..hopefully it will soon!:(
28th Aug 2018 9:13pm
Romantic. The last lines call out to the desired one to help the writer experience love under the stars for themselves:
Oh do I wish you were here just so I could then see,
If finding love under the sky is just as I thought it to be
Oh do I wish you were here just so I could then see,
If finding love under the sky is just as I thought it to be
28th Aug 2018 11:40pm
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8th Sep 2018 4:13pm
So well written-the imagery I saw was beautiful-the emotion encompassed my own as I have a lover in Croatia so far away-may I send this to her?
9th Sep 2018 4:46pm
