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Quick And Quiet
She was used to one minute men
Done in one round who never made a sound
Then I came around, verbs no nouns
Serving up that good dick by the pound
Then suddenly she began to complain
Wanted a beast and now want me tame
Now she asking why you take so long?
Why that dick so strong, got me up all night moaning love songs
I said would you rather I cum quick
Skip all the pleasure and be done with the shit
Would you rather not hear me moan?
And sit back with your toy like your all alone
So it’s a sin to be long winded
And to keep fucking for over ten minutes?
Ok …From now on it’ll be quiet and quick
One round, no sound you know the usual shit
As good as that pussy is you’ll never know it
Because I’ll never tell you and I won’t show it
Right when that dick is hitting your spot
Fucking so good your toes curl in knots
And your eyes start to roll and your jaw has to drop
I’m gonna cum in that pussy so hard and fast
And you’ll want more but its a thing of the past
Quick and quiet, no bedroom riot
Was getting buffet and now its time for a diet
I’m jus proving a point to settle a score
Maybe theres satisfaction, when less is more
Done in one round who never made a sound
Then I came around, verbs no nouns
Serving up that good dick by the pound
Then suddenly she began to complain
Wanted a beast and now want me tame
Now she asking why you take so long?
Why that dick so strong, got me up all night moaning love songs
I said would you rather I cum quick
Skip all the pleasure and be done with the shit
Would you rather not hear me moan?
And sit back with your toy like your all alone
So it’s a sin to be long winded
And to keep fucking for over ten minutes?
Ok …From now on it’ll be quiet and quick
One round, no sound you know the usual shit
As good as that pussy is you’ll never know it
Because I’ll never tell you and I won’t show it
Right when that dick is hitting your spot
Fucking so good your toes curl in knots
And your eyes start to roll and your jaw has to drop
I’m gonna cum in that pussy so hard and fast
And you’ll want more but its a thing of the past
Quick and quiet, no bedroom riot
Was getting buffet and now its time for a diet
I’m jus proving a point to settle a score
Maybe theres satisfaction, when less is more
Published 21st Aug 2018
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21st Aug 2018 10:49am
Yo bro. You definitely point out something that’s real, they have tendency to want it in their minds yet the reality seems they would have it over n done with... this was smooth n hard...loved it! :)
21st Aug 2018 9:56pm
preciate it man...
I have heard so much static about under achieving men and then I was presented with a new dynamic...the unintentional over achiever lol its like we cant win haha
thought it would be fun to write about
I have heard so much static about under achieving men and then I was presented with a new dynamic...the unintentional over achiever lol its like we cant win haha
thought it would be fun to write about
23rd Aug 2018 7:05pm
Verbs no nouns!!!! Teach her!!! She'll learn what she likes when you take it away....like the rest of us 😂😂😂
LIT written
LIT written
25th Aug 2018 1:10pm
those were my thoughts exactly...when its gone you'll want it back :P
thanks for reading
thanks for reading
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2018 7:16pm
Haha, enjoyed this - very clever ;)
4th Sep 2018 9:47pm
25th Sep 2018 9:48pm
25th Sep 2018 9:49pm
2nd Dec 2018 10:55pm
3rd Dec 2018 5:00pm
Sometimes you have to come with the action, so they know there aren't any games being played... thank you
13th Mar 2019 3:29pm
A hard lesson must be taught
Just to show that good dick for a woman is never at fault
Just to show that good dick for a woman is never at fault
13th Mar 2019 3:34pm
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26th Sep 2019 5:23pm
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26th Sep 2019 5:36pm
lol sometimes less is more I believe in the end she got it how she wanted it...glad you enjoyed this
18th Oct 2019 10:18am
🔥🔥🔥... Damn shame it had to be like that, i will take that bomb 💣 "D" over whack shit any day.. But loved this.. 💙💚
18th Oct 2019 3:32pm
19th Nov 2019 11:42pm
Hi Freelove87. Im new so im reading around getting to the know fellow poet.
I Must say I enjoyed reading the piece. Even tho you are making a point here.
I find it a lil bit hilarious. why? Because I could actually envision the scenes and all the talking.
Superb.
I Must say I enjoyed reading the piece. Even tho you are making a point here.
I find it a lil bit hilarious. why? Because I could actually envision the scenes and all the talking.
Superb.
20th Nov 2019 5:48pm
I also found humor in the story telling
glad you could get multiple vibes from this
thanks for reading
glad you could get multiple vibes from this
thanks for reading
26th Apr 2020 2:10pm
Really like your style. This gave me a giggle ; was getting buffet now it's time for a diet...been reading some of your other work tonight. Newly discovered but so impressed.
27th Apr 2020 3:25pm
thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed this
definitely appreciate you checking me out
hope you enjoy a few others as well...
definitely appreciate you checking me out
hope you enjoy a few others as well...
30th Apr 2020 2:32am
Once again, you provided the reader with a smooth flow as well as tantalizing visuals.
I sure hope this is not an actual experience of yours.
Still holding out for a long stroking, more than 10 minute beast.
Don't mind me while I shop around in your catalog of goodies.
I sure hope this is not an actual experience of yours.
Still holding out for a long stroking, more than 10 minute beast.
Don't mind me while I shop around in your catalog of goodies.
30th Apr 2020 4:11pm
I hope it turns into a shopping spree and all the goodies are equally satisfying ...
this was definitely loosely based on experience but I think they got the point...
thanks for reading
this was definitely loosely based on experience but I think they got the point...
thanks for reading
