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Why do you run
Away from my blade?
When all I want to do
Is to show you
How much I love you
And let you see my Heart
Which is stiched nice and tight
From the times you haved broken it
And maybe let you see my brain, too
To show you
The memories I have
Of crying to myself
Please come to me
Why do you run
From my blade?
When all I want to do
Is to show you
How much I love you
Maybe I'd show you my stomach
Which is surely filled with butterflies
From the moments
Our eyes
Met
I bet you remember
Those special, special moments
Because I know that I do
Why do you run
From my blade?
When all I want to do
Is to show you
How much I love you
Away from my blade?
When all I want to do
Is to show you
How much I love you
And let you see my Heart
Which is stiched nice and tight
From the times you haved broken it
And maybe let you see my brain, too
To show you
The memories I have
Of crying to myself
Please come to me
Why do you run
From my blade?
When all I want to do
Is to show you
How much I love you
Maybe I'd show you my stomach
Which is surely filled with butterflies
From the moments
Our eyes
Met
I bet you remember
Those special, special moments
Because I know that I do
Why do you run
From my blade?
When all I want to do
Is to show you
How much I love you
Published 24th Dec 2009
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27th Dec 2009 2:40am
your verry talented i love your poem its really good i like how you said
"Why do you run from my blade?" it keeps me guessing what you will write next. well you should check my poetry sometime im always looking for comments or suggestions.
"Why do you run from my blade?" it keeps me guessing what you will write next. well you should check my poetry sometime im always looking for comments or suggestions.
27th Dec 2009 9:33am
"Why do you run
Away from my blade?
When all I want to do
Is to show you
How much I love you"
and I couldn't look away.
Brilliant.
Away from my blade?
When all I want to do
Is to show you
How much I love you"
and I couldn't look away.
Brilliant.
27th Dec 2009 12:19pm
I can't think of any adjectives to describe this - none would do it justice.. Such perfection is hard to come across; I'll definitely be on the lookout for more of your work.
"And let you see my Heart
Which is stiched nice and tight
From the times you haved broken it"
It makes me want to cry.. The honesty & the cruel response.. The fact that the persona still loves.. I can't get over it - just wow!
"And let you see my Heart
Which is stiched nice and tight
From the times you haved broken it"
It makes me want to cry.. The honesty & the cruel response.. The fact that the persona still loves.. I can't get over it - just wow!
