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Whisky thoughts

A waste of time and money honey
a life that's in a mess.
No one gives a toss it's funny
And some care even less.
Jack Daniel’s gives a lazy smile
and warms the mood within.
Listen why not stay a while
now let your tale begin.
No words will melt a devil's heart
Jack Daniel’s slowly grins.
He beckons for my yarn to start
now where shall I begin.
Tears won't help you now he says
you're yesterday gone bad.
Tomorrow's where the devil plays
he cares not who is sad.
I decided not to bother now
not tell my story to Jack.
As he’s not worried anyhow
if I’m ever coming back.
Written by Lil
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Just words that seem to go well together.
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