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Hollows
Souls that fall on the floor
Pitter pat pitter pat
Its comes knocking at your door
It calls it screams
Slipping through the cracks
To shatter the dreams
Only to break it all at the seams
Abandon the hope you left behind
As it appears in the pitch black
Do you hear it now
With a tap or a snap
Don’t turn around
THE DEMON IS AT YOUR BACK!
Pitter pat pitter pat
Its comes knocking at your door
It calls it screams
Slipping through the cracks
To shatter the dreams
Only to break it all at the seams
Abandon the hope you left behind
As it appears in the pitch black
Do you hear it now
With a tap or a snap
Don’t turn around
THE DEMON IS AT YOUR BACK!
Published 19th Jul 2018
| Edited 25th Jul 2018
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19th Jul 2018 8:02pm
21st Jul 2018 2:33am
Very vivid picture. I am not sure if you're aware of this but the word you are thinking of is "seams", not "seems." not trying to hurt your feelings just trying to help. A lot of people will think you an amateur over a spelling mistake.
25th Jul 2018 3:02am
It's alright i was kinda pissed when I was writing it so there was bound to be a few misspelled words I missed. Thank you by the way.
