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Sorry
Are you strong enough?
strong enough to accept,
accept an apology you never received
strong enough to forgive,
forgive someone who wasn't sorry
sadness builds
erupting in self doubt
lava running down her face
Hold her
Love her
Be her
For just one day
strong enough to accept,
accept an apology you never received
strong enough to forgive,
forgive someone who wasn't sorry
sadness builds
erupting in self doubt
lava running down her face
Hold her
Love her
Be her
For just one day
Published 13th Jul 2018
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13th Jul 2018 1:25pm
I adhere to the theory of forgiveness but for sure I try to not let the same situation happen again. Its hard when you lose something/someone you cared deeply about.
13th Jul 2018 1:30pm
I love, love, love your first stanza..so much truth in it.
It takes a humble person to apologize and even more of a humble person to accept the apology.
It takes a humble person to apologize and even more of a humble person to accept the apology.
13th Jul 2018 3:12pm
this is powerful dearest Pixel
strong enough to forgive someone who wasn't sorry?
I could hear this being asked of me while reading...
excellent...
love Crim
strong enough to forgive someone who wasn't sorry?
I could hear this being asked of me while reading...
excellent...
love Crim
13th Jul 2018 3:18pm
Thanks so much guys
I'm still finding my feet here.
Saying Sorry and really meaning it, is a never ending life battle
#Pixel
I'm still finding my feet here.
Saying Sorry and really meaning it, is a never ending life battle
#Pixel
13th Jul 2018 10:03pm
This is a great thought-provoking poem, PixelArt. I personally don't think I'm strong enough, but I could one day surprise myself.
Great poem, and welcome to DUP!
Great poem, and welcome to DUP!
17th Jul 2018 5:42pm
Real Love forgives many things
Because real love of another just doesn't stop till death
It's a rare thing
Because real love of another just doesn't stop till death
It's a rare thing
