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some sail through life, others fall
some people live like happy fish in the sea
beautiful waves touching fins
soft water, heavenly amounts of comfort
and pleasant bright sights
safely away from a fishing line
they swim around, the lucky little fishes
swimming in the direction of their choice
waves of beautiful luck
moving with a gentle ease
no threats exist around the corner
the fishermans hook aimed at the cursed and unlucky
those poor little fishes
threatened and pained
whilst living in the sea
flapping about , attempting to race away
some are sadly hooked
pulled up from the home in which they live
a life over, free flowing friendly fins
receiving all of the bad luck
poor little fishes
out of sync with the light
poor little fishes
no control in sight
the fisherman had control
fingers pointed at their friendly fins
turned into a victim of the world above the sea
beautiful waves touching fins
soft water, heavenly amounts of comfort
and pleasant bright sights
safely away from a fishing line
they swim around, the lucky little fishes
swimming in the direction of their choice
waves of beautiful luck
moving with a gentle ease
no threats exist around the corner
the fishermans hook aimed at the cursed and unlucky
those poor little fishes
threatened and pained
whilst living in the sea
flapping about , attempting to race away
some are sadly hooked
pulled up from the home in which they live
a life over, free flowing friendly fins
receiving all of the bad luck
poor little fishes
out of sync with the light
poor little fishes
no control in sight
the fisherman had control
fingers pointed at their friendly fins
turned into a victim of the world above the sea
Published 12th Jul 2018
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12th Jul 2018 7:18pm
Some have a gift of writing and perspective as you! Your words so well thought out and succinct.Nice job.
I always feel a spirit of the word come up through your writings.
2 Corinthians 4:8-9 We are afflicted in every way, but not crushed; perplexed, but not driven to despair; persecuted, but not forsaken; struck down, but not destroyed;
I always feel a spirit of the word come up through your writings.
2 Corinthians 4:8-9 We are afflicted in every way, but not crushed; perplexed, but not driven to despair; persecuted, but not forsaken; struck down, but not destroyed;
12th Jul 2018 7:27pm
thankyou very much ! i have actually just edited it a little because i was not sure about some of the lines and the way it was layed out.. not sure if this edited one is better or not ?
12th Jul 2018 7:31pm
