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The Snake's Tears
Victory is yours, son of Reyes
Blessed are you with abilities during this phase
The Raven's Curse has been put to rest
A reward earned by your best
The search is not yet over, however
For there are 3 more amulets to recover
The journey will take you to the sea
Where a village echoes a common plea
Joy and pleasure have been sucked from each soul
Only to be returned by payment to the one in control
This entity is different than the rest
It will place your will and determination to the test
It is a simple task if you prepare
If not, than accept your soul to surrender to despair
For there is no greater source of one's fears
Than within the dreadful Snake's Tears.
Location:
To the North, where the majestic waves roar
Bringing forth resources at a time of plenty
It is now a place where rain continuously pours
A simple sign of nature's misery.
Blessed are you with abilities during this phase
The Raven's Curse has been put to rest
A reward earned by your best
The search is not yet over, however
For there are 3 more amulets to recover
The journey will take you to the sea
Where a village echoes a common plea
Joy and pleasure have been sucked from each soul
Only to be returned by payment to the one in control
This entity is different than the rest
It will place your will and determination to the test
It is a simple task if you prepare
If not, than accept your soul to surrender to despair
For there is no greater source of one's fears
Than within the dreadful Snake's Tears.
Location:
To the North, where the majestic waves roar
Bringing forth resources at a time of plenty
It is now a place where rain continuously pours
A simple sign of nature's misery.
Published 23rd Jun 2018
| Edited 27th Jun 2018
Author's Note
This would have been book 2 of my fantasy series.
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2018 1:13pm
I have ti say my dear this definitely worth comn back for and Finishing ...
Very interesting story
Very interesting story
23rd Jun 2018 4:27pm
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2018 1:29pm
Loving this!! You have a real gift.
Keep this going. I have two ideas I keep them in the back of my notes and add as it comes to me. This is a great concept!!
Keep this going. I have two ideas I keep them in the back of my notes and add as it comes to me. This is a great concept!!
23rd Jun 2018 4:27pm
I hope you understand the spirit in which I offer this, dearest Luna:
If Ken does get together with you to flesh out what you have begun (which is bewitching in both visual & text), I'm going to save a slot in my Reading List for the results. I only have a couple open, and one of them is for what I'm sure is looming on the horizon. I shall be waiting with boundless enthusiasm!
p.s. Oh! And if this turns out to be a co-written set, I'll RL them BOTH... I can't break up a set now can I...
If Ken does get together with you to flesh out what you have begun (which is bewitching in both visual & text), I'm going to save a slot in my Reading List for the results. I only have a couple open, and one of them is for what I'm sure is looming on the horizon. I shall be waiting with boundless enthusiasm!
p.s. Oh! And if this turns out to be a co-written set, I'll RL them BOTH... I can't break up a set now can I...
27th Jun 2018 9:15pm
Dear Jade, your comment has filled me with excitement! I've haven't been in contact with Ken since our last collaboration, but I imagine that once he has a rough draft ready, he'll be sending me a PM.
As a matter of fact, I've been going over my old notes about this potential fantasy series, and I've been making dramatic changes. I'm working on the time-line of the events that happened leading up to the beginning of book 1, and I've created potential continents using a program online. As long as I have inspiration, I'll keep on adding more details.
As a matter of fact, I've been going over my old notes about this potential fantasy series, and I've been making dramatic changes. I'm working on the time-line of the events that happened leading up to the beginning of book 1, and I've created potential continents using a program online. As long as I have inspiration, I'll keep on adding more details.
Oh dear sister...
If I have given you that little spark of motivation towards what I know you can do, I've seen it in you more than once, then I too am excited at the implications! Lavish the time you feel is needed... I'll be ready once the unveiling arrives. Those RL slots are now reserved and will be there for when the time comes!
*roars to send out the confirmation of things to come...*
If I have given you that little spark of motivation towards what I know you can do, I've seen it in you more than once, then I too am excited at the implications! Lavish the time you feel is needed... I'll be ready once the unveiling arrives. Those RL slots are now reserved and will be there for when the time comes!
*roars to send out the confirmation of things to come...*
