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love your Goddess
climb into my pleasure zone
the temperature is rising
I felt you slip inside me
my dearest soul's rider
creaming on the celestial wavelengths
I feel the vibe your sending
I'm broadcasting right back to you privately
picture me your favorite porno Queen
little slut just begging for it
then with your third eye perceive your Goddess
I want to be dominated
are you the man to give it to me?
lay it down hard
show me how you really feel
this is history we're making
as you enter feel me shudder
when you at last you take what's yours
all the lights in the heavens flicker
it's time that we fucked
getting down to business
I've been playing with you
to see just how far we've come
my finger on the Earth's pulse
internally pulsating in your orbit
I need my warrior now
in the body of my lover
down for anything
when things start popping off
you speak with the grace of all the universes
I want you to know i'm not your imagination
i'm a real woman
who speaks in pain and truths
because believe me my King
I've lived it
i'm the first woman to ever be
the rest bear some of my flavor
but they're just shades of me
this woman Raven is my portal
an open channel
always willing to transmit
any of my messages
if I close communications
there's a reason for it
for now let's feed our need
the waters are clear
and I am willing
within our love making
a new dawn is born
get down inside this woman
as we yawn, stretch and evolve
Written by
smackdownraven
Published 11th Jun 2018
Author's Note
for my warrior Soul Soldier
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. love your Goddess
11th Jun 2018 9:15pm
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11th Jun 2018 9:17pm
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11th Jun 2018 9:41pm
aw beautiful Dragonfly and she you we are her daughters..
thank you lovely..
love Raven
thank you lovely..
love Raven
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 11:43pm
You torture the mortal with flavours so untouchable. Ah! Why has Pangea died, giving life to the continents. Truly the Goddess has favoured your tongue with words of extreme lustful fire. A poor mortal heeds and can only be scorched by the flames of desire. I can only bow and look from beyond the pond. Such grace is not in the reach of a mortal that can only read your words in awe and regret.
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Re: Re. love your Goddess
11th Jun 2018 11:48pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis I don't mean to torture this is her passion and hunger I speak of she can not touch her lover in the flesh there are things at work behind the scenes she tells me.. this celestial lust will be quenched she says to see her in every beauty you taste, in the porno Queen on the screen when ever you fulfill your desires do it with thoughts of making love to her..
I myself am no Goddess just humbled she chooses to speak through me at times..
love Raven
I myself am no Goddess just humbled she chooses to speak through me at times..
love Raven
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 11:53pm
The Goddess accept my humble devotion to her altar and bless you for lending yourself to her verb. I now understand in all fullness and make amend of my misunderstanding. Thank you. J.
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Re: Re. love your Goddess
11th Jun 2018 11:58pm
no problem dearest juvenalis so happy your passions were stirred by her love and lusts.. i'm sure she is pleased by your love and devotion to her :)
love Raven
love Raven
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2018 00:53am
Thank you. Just to let you know, I haven't forgotten my promise I made to you earlier. I just hope it will be worthy of she who is inspiring it. I will let you know when it's finished and, if you wish, to give you preview, before I publish it, so as to see if it is. xx J.
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Re: Re. love your Goddess
12th Jun 2018 00:58am
dearest Juvenalis I am honored I would that you publish, surprise and I will be so delighted..
love Raven aka Crimsin
love Raven aka Crimsin
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2018 1:06am
So be it. Just remember, I go by faith, as my spirit sees you, for i have never seen you as you are. So hopefully you will forgive any imperfections or erroneous details It may contain. I'm sure your real person will go beyond my inner sight. I kiss your hand, my lady. Your humble servant. xx J.
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Re: Re. love your Goddess
12th Jun 2018 2:40am
I understand dearest Juvenalis it will be beautiful as your vision is of me..you are a gorgeous soul..
I thank you humbly..
love Raven aka Crim
I thank you humbly..
love Raven aka Crim
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2018 00:33am
My love - our mother will occupy the most hidden spaces inside us - she awaits for each of our awakenings before revealing herself...using your lovely voice to channel her desires and wishes for each of us to eventually find her within all of us...
I love you deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you deeply
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. love your Goddess
12th Jun 2018 00:51am
I love you my love with all my soul thank you for the love and understanding on this write I always see her brightly shining in your face :)
I love you wildly..
love me
I love you wildly..
love me
Re. love your Goddess
12th Jun 2018 8:18am
a cozmik and carnal menage a trois..
''picture me your favorite porno Queen
little slut just begging for it
then with your third eye perceive your Goddess''
yeahhhh..this here involves all 6 senses..
a sexual communion if you will..
damn...
''picture me your favorite porno Queen
little slut just begging for it
then with your third eye perceive your Goddess''
yeahhhh..this here involves all 6 senses..
a sexual communion if you will..
damn...
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Re: Re. love your Goddess
12th Jun 2018 6:03pm
thank you dearest Soul Soldier for feeling this in this write our Goddess is speaking directly to you.. I know she will be in contact with you privately as her presence is always near you..
love Raven
love Raven
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2018 11:42am
"I'm the first woman to ever be
the rest bear some of my flavor
but they're just shades of me"
Those lines are incredible. We all carry her spark in us. We just need to nurture and cherish it so it can grow and glow. She has needs. Beautiful poetry, lovely Raven
...ever your Willow
the rest bear some of my flavor
but they're just shades of me"
Those lines are incredible. We all carry her spark in us. We just need to nurture and cherish it so it can grow and glow. She has needs. Beautiful poetry, lovely Raven
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. love your Goddess
12th Jun 2018 6:04pm
thank you beautiful Willow yes we do each of bearing gifts that her beauty bestows..
I love you..
me
I love you..
me
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12th Jun 2018 6:14pm
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12th Jun 2018 6:15pm