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Amongst The Silence
Stretched out amongst the silence
not understanding
page upon page
ink spots splattered
more than meaning
holding on to words
feelings evoked
deep inside my tomb
shunned to die
within the darkness
begging to see
the light filter
out another day
write for me my release
a detailed death reprieve
scripted in holograph
marking the right path
so I can live in peace
not understanding
page upon page
ink spots splattered
more than meaning
holding on to words
feelings evoked
deep inside my tomb
shunned to die
within the darkness
begging to see
the light filter
out another day
write for me my release
a detailed death reprieve
scripted in holograph
marking the right path
so I can live in peace
Published 11th Jun 2018
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11th Jun 2018 5:30pm
damn it dearest Tim I felt the weight of this..
powerful poem..
would that I could..
love Brenda
powerful poem..
would that I could..
love Brenda
11th Jun 2018 5:31pm
Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 6:37pm
This is a heavy piece, pulling downward on the mind. Beautiful poetry weighted with life aches. Sending hugs, my friend
...Willow
...Willow
11th Jun 2018 6:49pm
12th Jun 2018 00:05am
Woah did I feel the heart you poured into this. You described so much of what I can truly identify with.. I am touched!
12th Jun 2018 1:47am
18th Jun 2018 1:03pm
this is beautiful poetry
heavy in the weight it delivers
so effortlessly.
gem of a poet.
gem of a poem.
heavy in the weight it delivers
so effortlessly.
gem of a poet.
gem of a poem.
18th Jun 2018 1:04pm
