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Perfectionists
Crushed beneath
A pitiful greif
Melted by the eyes
Of perfectionists
Well-wishers
Patronizing
It's all on me
I am realizing
I can apologize
I could crucify myself
It's just humilation
Nude in New York city
I'll never forget it
I'm still bleeding
You'll never get it
You're too bright
I'll always regret it
It's alway gonna hurt
I'm just gonna let it.
A pitiful greif
Melted by the eyes
Of perfectionists
Well-wishers
Patronizing
It's all on me
I am realizing
I can apologize
I could crucify myself
It's just humilation
Nude in New York city
I'll never forget it
I'm still bleeding
You'll never get it
You're too bright
I'll always regret it
It's alway gonna hurt
I'm just gonna let it.
Published 9th May 2018
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
9th May 2018 5:45am
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9th May 2018 9:20am
It does indeed. Glad you thought so, I appreciate your read as always. Best wishes!
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
10th May 2018 6:05pm
Melted by their eyes... wow... powerful and the feeling is so real
You've penned this picture perfectly
I really appreciate this ink, it is extremely thought provoking- and I am wishing you encouragement amidst the doubt
~rosegold
You've penned this picture perfectly
I really appreciate this ink, it is extremely thought provoking- and I am wishing you encouragement amidst the doubt
~rosegold
10th May 2018 8:44pm
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and for those kind words, I appreciate it.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
