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QUIXOTIC SENRYU
Windmill menace waits
Tilt not, lance arm needs mending
Heros too crave care
Tilt not, lance arm needs mending
Heros too crave care
Published 4th May 2018
Author's Note
Sometimes it's up to us to help the heros.
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4th May 2018 7:58pm
Hero's come in all aspects of life
Not just from armed forces, of which they do a great job
But I'm on about the everyday person
Great write
Not just from armed forces, of which they do a great job
But I'm on about the everyday person
Great write
4th May 2018 10:17pm
4th May 2018 8:03pm
Oh ... I know what this about ... *giggles* ... love this crisp enigma ... bravo GW
4th May 2018 10:15pm
Thank you dear Soledad! Gee where'd I get this idea? A little dragonfly whispered challenge. I appreciate you. Merci beaucoup pour l'inspiration.
4th May 2018 10:18pm
You are so so welcome ... I love it when others’ poetry inspires me or vice versa ...
5th May 2018 3:54am
5th May 2018 4:18am
6th May 2018 3:43am
I like this.
Most often the biggest toughest guys are the most vulnerable inside.
you are good with this types of forms, like haiku or senryu, much enjoyed.
Most often the biggest toughest guys are the most vulnerable inside.
you are good with this types of forms, like haiku or senryu, much enjoyed.
6th May 2018 5:58am
Thank you very much Layla! Haiku/Senryu are indeed two of my favorite poetry styles. I see beauty in the ability to encapsulate elements of nature and human nature using a modicum of words. To me it emphasizes just how powerful a word can be. Thank you again for your kind words.
10th May 2018 1:37pm
10th May 2018 6:51pm
