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R a i n v i i
the clouds above
thick and grey
sparks they align
and deliver her
expression
Rain
she speaks
brings joy
brings smiles
brings life
brings light
the light
may be
brief for some
yet
for others
it is
all they need
what follows as sound
is aeons late
yet
it is her poetry
for hearts
that know her language
Published 3rd May 2018
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3rd May 2018 1:21pm
heartfelt...this poetic rain ..the need . true
in its syncing lang..does it need at all the arriving or accompanied sounds lights n all the adds ..the essence this signifies..even in its felt silence ..
am reminded of my v.first read of urs, thats 'rain' too i hope..
rain on :)
in its syncing lang..does it need at all the arriving or accompanied sounds lights n all the adds ..the essence this signifies..even in its felt silence ..
am reminded of my v.first read of urs, thats 'rain' too i hope..
rain on :)
3rd May 2018 1:29pm
Welcome
is the Artist Admired!!
Welcome
is the Friend!!
as an Artist Uma, who better than you...to understand an attempt
at expression even by scribblers like this one.
yes. one word.
Rain.
adored. missed. cherished. treasured and felt.
the essence...my oh my your keen eye!
and..humbled me when you mentioned
remembered my earliest ink..on the same subject..which is close to this heart!
welcome
and cherished...the visits
of peers! friends.
immense..
and beyond words
is the Artist Admired!!
Welcome
is the Friend!!
as an Artist Uma, who better than you...to understand an attempt
at expression even by scribblers like this one.
yes. one word.
Rain.
adored. missed. cherished. treasured and felt.
the essence...my oh my your keen eye!
and..humbled me when you mentioned
remembered my earliest ink..on the same subject..which is close to this heart!
welcome
and cherished...the visits
of peers! friends.
immense..
and beyond words
3rd May 2018 8:41pm
Blessed are the friends who inspire such an appreciation.
The thoughts you have so vividly penned here,
could have just as easily been written by me, of you,
had I the talent and thoughtfulness.
May they journey always within the light of your pen.
The thoughts you have so vividly penned here,
could have just as easily been written by me, of you,
had I the talent and thoughtfulness.
May they journey always within the light of your pen.
welcome
is the friend admired!
welcome
is their presnece
both on the page
as well as in life!
blessed, yes, indeed feel the same for self re ALL my dearest
Friends here!
Total disagreement, however, re the friend's gross misapprehension of her talents and abilities!! quite the opposite to the truth!!
I wish my pen had any light...the presence of light only is felt when the mention of friends occurs on the page..regardless how dark the ink!!
appreciation
beyond words!!
and deeds!
is the friend admired!
welcome
is their presnece
both on the page
as well as in life!
blessed, yes, indeed feel the same for self re ALL my dearest
Friends here!
Total disagreement, however, re the friend's gross misapprehension of her talents and abilities!! quite the opposite to the truth!!
I wish my pen had any light...the presence of light only is felt when the mention of friends occurs on the page..regardless how dark the ink!!
appreciation
beyond words!!
and deeds!
Anonymous
5th May 2018 8:40am
(rain) Drops
don`t seem
as dense
they are light
coloured
in words
as vivid
as this piece
where
the inspiration
is drawn ...
must be
a good place
*muah*
5th May 2018 2:07pm
*blush*
well... yes.
indeed a Place Amazing...
hence the inspiration
dear Friend!!
welcome
is the Poet admired!
Welcome
is the review affectionate!
deep
the appreciation
beyond words.
well... yes.
indeed a Place Amazing...
hence the inspiration
dear Friend!!
welcome
is the Poet admired!
Welcome
is the review affectionate!
deep
the appreciation
beyond words.
8th May 2018 7:24am
Hey, I liked your composition and also the choice of words. I also like how others have replied in the similar pattern :)
11th May 2018 11:03am
Welcome
dear peer
firstly to the community that is DU
as well as
to the scribble!
pleasure and joy
are what's felt
the scribe made sense
and appealed to you!
appreciate
the visit
the review
immensely
dear peer
firstly to the community that is DU
as well as
to the scribble!
pleasure and joy
are what's felt
the scribe made sense
and appealed to you!
appreciate
the visit
the review
immensely
