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What I Love
The first thing I loved was your eyes.
I fell in and to my surprise,
Was certain I'd fallen before.
The next thing I loved was your smile.
A little lopsided and while
I looked at it, I smiled too.
Then I fell in love with your laugh.
Its resonance showed me the path
To loving the rest of you.
When I felt the thrill of your touch
The electrical current was such
I wanted to be plugged in forever.
I noticed that I loved your mind.
The thoughts you shared were the kind
That showed me the good man you are.
Then I considered the whole.
And what I loved most was your soul;
The soul I have loved throughout time.
I fell in and to my surprise,
Was certain I'd fallen before.
The next thing I loved was your smile.
A little lopsided and while
I looked at it, I smiled too.
Then I fell in love with your laugh.
Its resonance showed me the path
To loving the rest of you.
When I felt the thrill of your touch
The electrical current was such
I wanted to be plugged in forever.
I noticed that I loved your mind.
The thoughts you shared were the kind
That showed me the good man you are.
Then I considered the whole.
And what I loved most was your soul;
The soul I have loved throughout time.
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