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My Alone: Pit of the Heart
Please
I am trying
Can you hear me
Your mind. Body. Emotions.
All a soundproof glass
Between help. Between me. You.
You alone
Carry the name
That is etched into my skin
Through pain and promise-
We are never apart
-Here. Now.
I feel so far from you
Us who shared the same
Mentally shattered -womb
Can you hear me
My heart. My pride. My joy.
Brother.
Please hold on-
Please save yourself-
Please live- if not only for yourself.
Published 28th Apr 2018
| Edited 28th Jan 2019
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28th Apr 2018 2:29pm
a passionate plea...
hope wish and pray it's a work of fiction...
not taking away anything from the exceptional expression
hope wish and pray it's a work of fiction...
not taking away anything from the exceptional expression
28th Apr 2018 6:18pm
Thanks for the comment love. Unfouetantly im doing everything i can to help him but im so far away it feels lik nothings really gettig there.
He will pull out of this though. I believe. :)
He will pull out of this though. I believe. :)
28th Apr 2018 6:31pm
oh yes he Will!
and juz like him...despite the distance physical..you are giving the best shot you can! and sometimes you don't know how your words do become the wall that avoids a catastrophe!!
wish you both well...and soon!
and juz like him...despite the distance physical..you are giving the best shot you can! and sometimes you don't know how your words do become the wall that avoids a catastrophe!!
wish you both well...and soon!
