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Hosting Darkness
Trapped
in a cyclone
spiralling thoughts
repeat
reckless isolation
seeking safety
in retreat
hosting darkness
bewitched
yet again
clutching its wrath
settling in
readying self
descending swiftly
as I begin
drowning
once more
murky waters
plunging
ever deep
weighted
in secrets
not meant to keep
alone
sinking
adorning
shame and fear
swallowing
choking
knowing
imminent death near
in a cyclone
spiralling thoughts
repeat
reckless isolation
seeking safety
in retreat
hosting darkness
bewitched
yet again
clutching its wrath
settling in
readying self
descending swiftly
as I begin
drowning
once more
murky waters
plunging
ever deep
weighted
in secrets
not meant to keep
alone
sinking
adorning
shame and fear
swallowing
choking
knowing
imminent death near
Published 27th Apr 2018
| Edited 9th May 2018
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5th May 2018 9:02pm
Not sure if my interpretation is quite accurate, but I felt this write deeply
A moving depiction of the relentless world of darkness which resides in the mind...
Resounding, overwhelming, powerful
A moving depiction of the relentless world of darkness which resides in the mind...
Resounding, overwhelming, powerful
15th Jan 2019 7:34am
I enjoyed reading this I could me wrong but I got the sense of anxiety from this. The flow was great and very well written.
17th Jan 2019 12:07pm
Dear BC,
Anxiety, fear, pain...one of my darker periods. Did you sense any identification with it? I appreciate the read and your response. Thank you.
Anxiety, fear, pain...one of my darker periods. Did you sense any identification with it? I appreciate the read and your response. Thank you.
