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Five Little Letters
Lying here listening to
Thunder rolling in
Rain cascading off
The roof
Feeling about as alone
In this world
As a body
Could
Up pops a message
From you
My whole world
Shifts
Oh my love
The power of the written word
My soul on fire
With five little letters … “hello”
Suddenly the day holds
Promise
The night holds
Bliss
A place
Of magic
With the rain and thunder all-round
Wrapped in the passion of your arms
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
24th Apr 2018 8:07am
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Re: Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 8:15am
I’ve had some friends send me pictures and challenge me... lol! Most of the time I’ll get one done in ten minutes when my muse is sitting on my shoulder 🌹
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Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 12:23pm
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24th Apr 2018 6:31pm
Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 12:25pm
It is quite the lovely experience to connect so deeply in written word alone🖤
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Re: Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 6:33pm
I’m sensing you, my friend, have an old soul! Hard to find in the young people of today!
Thank you very much 🌹
~M~
Thank you very much 🌹
~M~
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24th Apr 2018 7:13pm
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24th Apr 2018 7:34pm
Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 3:27pm
Re: Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 6:35pm
Hi sweetness!
I’m happy to see your name here! How is your Yoga vacation going?
~M~
I’m happy to see your name here! How is your Yoga vacation going?
~M~
Re: Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 6:37pm
Just finished up a written test ... lunch in 20 minutes ... vegan buffet ... more classes in the afternoon
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Very Nice!
24th Apr 2018 4:40pm
Lovely poem. Great job! My only critique: The "Hi" at the beginning feels a little out of place. That's it, though! Wonderful mood. :)
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Re: Very Nice!
24th Apr 2018 6:37pm
I honestly don’t know how that got there but thanks for the “crit", it’s been taken care of!!
Thank you also for the kind review 🌹
Always
Justafan
Thank you also for the kind review 🌹
Always
Justafan
Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 6:22pm
Very Beautiful , And Well Conveyed Feeling To This , Mi' Lady...
I can *feel* what you describe through your words...
And the nervous expectation , desire and longing
in the photograph , flows perfectly with it !
Excellent !
I can *feel* what you describe through your words...
And the nervous expectation , desire and longing
in the photograph , flows perfectly with it !
Excellent !
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Re: Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 6:42pm
Afternoon Wolfie :)
Thank you for sharing a moment of your afternoon with me🌹
Always
~M~
Thank you for sharing a moment of your afternoon with me🌹
Always
~M~
Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 6:39pm
Re: Re. Five Little Letters
24th Apr 2018 6:55pm
I’m honored that you have read and reviewed 3 of my poems!
Thank you so much 🌹
Always
Justafan
Thank you so much 🌹
Always
Justafan
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
24th Apr 2018 7:00pm
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Re: Re. Five Little Letters
25th Apr 2018 2:48am
Thank you very much for reading my work and leaving this lovely compliment 🌹
Always
Justafan
Always
Justafan
Re. Five Little Letters
25th Apr 2018 2:50am
Wow! He only said, 'Hello'. Doesn't mean he wants to stay the night, does it? Maybe it's the HOPE more than anything that's making you think it might happen or the fact that you know what men are like or what your man is like. It's a nice poem however & I felt as though I was right in the moment with you. Well described. :-)
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Re: Re. Five Little Letters
25th Apr 2018 3:45am
Snaggy, you tickle me sometimes :)
Thank you for diving in and giving me this smile I’m wearing!!🌹
Always (wink)
Justafan of yours
Thank you for diving in and giving me this smile I’m wearing!!🌹
Always (wink)
Justafan of yours