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Gravy Train
All Aboard
through space and time
leave another day behind
streaks of white
they're oh so bright
i tell you,
everything will feel so right
psychedelia and bliss
you can have anything you wish
write out a list;
i insist
happily, the galaxies
you will see
there's always time
you just must find
a way to cross your mental lines
remove the pain with fantasy
stop the rain and you will see
this train is yours to be
here we are
get out your list
it's time to meet the alchemist
through space and time
leave another day behind
streaks of white
they're oh so bright
i tell you,
everything will feel so right
psychedelia and bliss
you can have anything you wish
write out a list;
i insist
happily, the galaxies
you will see
there's always time
you just must find
a way to cross your mental lines
remove the pain with fantasy
stop the rain and you will see
this train is yours to be
here we are
get out your list
it's time to meet the alchemist
Published 19th Apr 2018
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It's a nice poem, mellow and all but I think I will give this train a miss. I'm sticking to Whiskey, my friend. I once wrote a fun poem about some of the experiences I have heard from people taking hallucinogenics & I hope one day to put it out on DUP. I think you may like it.
Roll up, roll up for the mystery tour! lol. ;-)
Roll up, roll up for the mystery tour! lol. ;-)
Totally, I understand passing it up. It's interesting, because I don't drink anymore at all, but I do occasionally do this. I got bad off on alcohol and it just gets so bad every time. Life shattering for me. To each their own!
I used to do a lot of hallucinogenics and I don't nearly as much these days, but I really enjoy writing about it and all of the glowing experiences I've had. I obviously am quite biased about them. My brother took too many tabs one time and just absolutely refuses them now. Well, except the occasional shroom trip.
Thanks for the comment, Snagg! I imagine a very eccentric conductor or a carny. I'd love to read the poem!
I used to do a lot of hallucinogenics and I don't nearly as much these days, but I really enjoy writing about it and all of the glowing experiences I've had. I obviously am quite biased about them. My brother took too many tabs one time and just absolutely refuses them now. Well, except the occasional shroom trip.
Thanks for the comment, Snagg! I imagine a very eccentric conductor or a carny. I'd love to read the poem!
