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OM
My Sweet
Sound of meditation
As I sit in virtual silence
Writing this dedication
I relish in the alluring scent
As the precipitation
Moistens the lips
Drip...drip...
Down the thigh...
I want to taste
The waters of Spanish solitude
Lying there in the nude
Reading...
With gratitude
Touching herself
Pretending it was me
Inclined in her soul.........Lyrically
Sound of meditation
As I sit in virtual silence
Writing this dedication
I relish in the alluring scent
As the precipitation
Moistens the lips
Drip...drip...
Down the thigh...
I want to taste
The waters of Spanish solitude
Lying there in the nude
Reading...
With gratitude
Touching herself
Pretending it was me
Inclined in her soul.........Lyrically
Published 19th Apr 2018
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19th Apr 2018 3:01pm
OM = Oh My. I love this. The varying stanza length ... crisp line breaks ... "As the precipitation/Moistens the lips" (could be the mouth watering, could be southern lips, could be both sets) ... "I want to taste/The waters of Spanish solitude (my favorite line) ... "Touching herself/Pretending it was me" ... unfair teasing multiple line break ... then you bring it (and me) home ... "Inclined in her soul........Lyrically" What can I say ... I'm spent ... and yours
19th Apr 2018 3:04pm
19th Apr 2018 5:03pm
A sensual read with exhilarating metaphors that made me tingle in delight.
Well done!
Well done!
19th Apr 2018 5:28pm
