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You Still Care
When everything seems to work
When everything is going right
When it gives you a reason to live
When it helps you sleep at night
When it gives you the feeling of joy
When it feels like you could fly
When it sounds like the sweetest song
When it’s so good it makes you cry
When the sky turns black
When your soul turns gray
When the mood changes
When the opinions sway
When you don’t know anymore
When you can’t think clearly
When you stress about it everyday
But you still love her dearly
When the answers are uncertain
When the hurt is too much to bare
When the fears are realized
And through this all, you still care.
When everything is going right
When it gives you a reason to live
When it helps you sleep at night
When it gives you the feeling of joy
When it feels like you could fly
When it sounds like the sweetest song
When it’s so good it makes you cry
When the sky turns black
When your soul turns gray
When the mood changes
When the opinions sway
When you don’t know anymore
When you can’t think clearly
When you stress about it everyday
But you still love her dearly
When the answers are uncertain
When the hurt is too much to bare
When the fears are realized
And through this all, you still care.
Published 17th Apr 2018
Author's Note
Went through a rough breakup in January. My girlfriend of 5 years left me and this is a result of that. I wrote it on lunch at work.
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