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Blinded

Your eyes, brown, like the deserts sand,
Hair as black as a raven,
I had longed to make you mine.
 
Skin as smooth as a baby's behind (lol)
I longed to touch you,
You're so devine.
 
Lips, red, like the petals of a rose,
Like a picture in portrait,
Your face made me feel like time froze.
 
Beautiful isn't she?, yes I know,
Thorns around her heart that was gold,
With walls that barricaded me from reaching my goal,
I long to make u mine but you're just like the rest.
 
You see my mistakes,  
Not my sorrows,
You see my anger,
Not my pain,
You see my love,
Not my fears.
 
Look through my eyes, they are the windows to my soul,
It may be dark,  
But there's a light, a place that you alone hold...
Written by Jamela
Published | Edited 6th Apr 2018
Author's Note
This piece was written from a letter that was never sent to a special someone,
I transformed my thoughts into words and those words into poetry
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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