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a vision

I saw a face in a weird cloud  
that no one else could see    
and also strange without a doubt    
it looked somehow like me    
   
it was some kind of my own self    
a part I'll never know    
a shadow of my very else    
unable to let go    
   
a meaning rose but burned away    
to leave a black burned face    
my eyes were closed to make it stay    
but then it got erased
Written by knowthyself (know thyself)
Published | Edited 5th Jun 2018
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