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queen harvest
There is a desert
moonlight
In the sights
Of my dream
As blanketed clouds
Purple
ascend
Over me
To be lost
In a scene
Gorgeous
Divinity
Golden
Infinity
approaching
my flowering
mind
I glimpsed
On open doors
For only minutes
As they fell
Into my
Open eyes
Published 31st Mar 2018
Author's Note
quick write tonight, living in my head, i feel it could go on more and i could talk more about the dream
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31st Mar 2018 2:42am
Purple clouds and gorgeous divinity, golden Infinity. I feel it's a beautiful dream. and a good sign for the future, isn't it? Want to read more about this dream:)))
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
31st Mar 2018 5:49pm
thank you so much rose :) i think my new writes have been more positive.
Anonymous
31st Mar 2018 3:37am
Marielle.. simply brilliant.. damn we write alike.. you're really great at the quick short lines.. into my list it goes.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
31st Mar 2018 5:49pm
really appreciate your feed back and the reading list addition! yes short lines have been truly resonating with me!
31st Mar 2018 7:03am
That's enlightening. So pure and smooth, it simulates my experiences somewhat too. Thanks for sharing.
31st Mar 2018 5:50pm
Hi! I really appreciate your feedback. Glad you liked my poem. Thank you!
31st Mar 2018 12:38pm
I feel this way a lot after a spring cloudburst, looking outside as the sun comes back around and watching the clouds clear. Beautifully written :)
31st Mar 2018 5:50pm
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