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Sarziah and the Dragon - Dragon's POV
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This is a POV piece...there's two parts and you can choose whose head you want to get into: Sarziah, the bold Elven woman come to fight her scaly foe (go here, if so:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/comment-reply/160230/610092/ )
....or you can be the Dragon who has other plans in mind! This is his POV below. Either way you choose, I hope you have a good time.
(Crit hard.)
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Sarziah and the Dragon - Dragon's POV
Part 1:
Soft, sensual and raw.
I had her grasped in my claw.
Lithe and bare, within my clutch
I wished she wouldn't squirm so much.
Up high above the vast, open sea,
We fly together
I feel her opening to me,
An opportunity.
I sense her resolve
dissolving.
She's mine, I know that now.
Her body, her breath
Her sex.
I can't hold back, I penetrate
that deep space she holds
Tight
Between her legs
I feel inside
She hides
But now she's laid bare
Up here in the salty air.
She cries out as my erection
Slides between her legs
To her moist caverns deep within.
My head spins
The rippled waters below
Carry her moans
across the earth to ears unknown.
I am beyond the will to cease
I feel her wrapped around my every inch
I hear her moan “Please!”
My length snug deep inside her
Perfect fit
Her lust
Her trust
This sex
Does she know what happens next?
Willing her to be strong,
I thrust
With all I had in me
And I saw it rise in her.
She peaked
Her flushed cheeks
Eyes closed
Mouth opened to an oh
Her climax squeezing tight
around my sex I felt
her rhythmic pulse
No more holding back.
I pushed my scaly sword up to the hilt.
I felt the tightening of my sac;
Lightning bolts flowed through my veins
As I poured myself in her
My energy was sapped
I held her tight, pulsing, throbbing
Our essences combined.
Glowing, reaching
Together
Out of touch with time.
Part 2:
The haze around the edges of my mind
started to thin
I felt the earth drawing us in
I held her tight and tried to fly
But we rolled in spirals through the sky
I couldn't muster strength to save myself
But I couldn't let her die,
My Angel elf who couldn't fly.
I whispered something soft
That she wasn't meant to hear.
I had to do it now,
But was she ready for this fate?
No going back now, though, I knew.
It was all I could do to keep her safe.
But the change didn't happen like it should,
Perhaps, I was too late.
Perhaps I was too weak.
Or, perhaps, it was Fate.
But whatever the reason,
She remained the same.
And then it came.
I felt the sickening smack
The impact
The scorching fire
of pain in every bone.
I felt it everywhere
My back
Broken
Wings shattered
Across the glossy bed of water.
And then all went numb.
“Are you okay?” I asked her
And she seemed fine.
I wasn't.
I knew that it was my time.
All that was me is in her now
My life had come to this.
I looked at her
One last time
I had so much left to say
But I swallowed sentiment
and said instead
“When she is born,
I want you to name her Rinay.”
As I felt a force tugging at my soul
I fought the urge
A moment more
I needed to remember this
One last look at her,
Her lips,
And silently I said
Farewell
With a single kiss.
This is a POV piece...there's two parts and you can choose whose head you want to get into: Sarziah, the bold Elven woman come to fight her scaly foe (go here, if so:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/comment-reply/160230/610092/ )
....or you can be the Dragon who has other plans in mind! This is his POV below. Either way you choose, I hope you have a good time.
(Crit hard.)
************
Sarziah and the Dragon - Dragon's POV
Part 1:
Soft, sensual and raw.
I had her grasped in my claw.
Lithe and bare, within my clutch
I wished she wouldn't squirm so much.
Up high above the vast, open sea,
We fly together
I feel her opening to me,
An opportunity.
I sense her resolve
dissolving.
She's mine, I know that now.
Her body, her breath
Her sex.
I can't hold back, I penetrate
that deep space she holds
Tight
Between her legs
I feel inside
She hides
But now she's laid bare
Up here in the salty air.
She cries out as my erection
Slides between her legs
To her moist caverns deep within.
My head spins
The rippled waters below
Carry her moans
across the earth to ears unknown.
I am beyond the will to cease
I feel her wrapped around my every inch
I hear her moan “Please!”
My length snug deep inside her
Perfect fit
Her lust
Her trust
This sex
Does she know what happens next?
Willing her to be strong,
I thrust
With all I had in me
And I saw it rise in her.
She peaked
Her flushed cheeks
Eyes closed
Mouth opened to an oh
Her climax squeezing tight
around my sex I felt
her rhythmic pulse
No more holding back.
I pushed my scaly sword up to the hilt.
I felt the tightening of my sac;
Lightning bolts flowed through my veins
As I poured myself in her
My energy was sapped
I held her tight, pulsing, throbbing
Our essences combined.
Glowing, reaching
Together
Out of touch with time.
Part 2:
The haze around the edges of my mind
started to thin
I felt the earth drawing us in
I held her tight and tried to fly
But we rolled in spirals through the sky
I couldn't muster strength to save myself
But I couldn't let her die,
My Angel elf who couldn't fly.
I whispered something soft
That she wasn't meant to hear.
I had to do it now,
But was she ready for this fate?
No going back now, though, I knew.
It was all I could do to keep her safe.
But the change didn't happen like it should,
Perhaps, I was too late.
Perhaps I was too weak.
Or, perhaps, it was Fate.
But whatever the reason,
She remained the same.
And then it came.
I felt the sickening smack
The impact
The scorching fire
of pain in every bone.
I felt it everywhere
My back
Broken
Wings shattered
Across the glossy bed of water.
And then all went numb.
“Are you okay?” I asked her
And she seemed fine.
I wasn't.
I knew that it was my time.
All that was me is in her now
My life had come to this.
I looked at her
One last time
I had so much left to say
But I swallowed sentiment
and said instead
“When she is born,
I want you to name her Rinay.”
As I felt a force tugging at my soul
I fought the urge
A moment more
I needed to remember this
One last look at her,
Her lips,
And silently I said
Farewell
With a single kiss.
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