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When i'm old and dying

when i'm old and dying baby who will by there crying,  
when i'm old and dying how bout' you?  
 
when i'm old and dying baby who will say i'm lying,  
when i'm old and dying how bout' you?  
 
i feel i've known you for so long  
but in fact we carry on  
one of the first few conversations that we have  
 
when i'm old and dying baby who will by there crying  
when i'm old and dying how bout' you?  
 
when i'm old and dying baby who will say i'm lying  
when i'm old and dying how bout' you?  
 
 
 
i cannot feel the way you touch me anymore  
but still it tears my heart  
when i see you hit that door!  
 
 
 
when i'm old and dying baby who will by there crying  
when i'm old and dying how bout' you?  
 
when i'm old and dying baby who will say i'm lying  
when i'm old and dying how bout' you?  
 
Written by samael (Zaroff poetry)
Published
Author's Note
Sing in the style of an upbeat but slightly sad Beatles song, intended for piano.

i’ll be back to add and edit and play with this further.feel free to add your own lyrics and suggest edits; i welcome ideas.
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