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ending begining
He-man packing
female glancing
hormones racing
signals exchanging
footsie playing
eyes betraying
dampness seeping
blood engorging
crouch expecting
cock erecting
thighs inviting
fanny tightening
throbbing gently
breathing heavy
heaving upwards
breaking bronco
ringing changes
banging cymbals
linking people
loving simple
female glancing
hormones racing
signals exchanging
footsie playing
eyes betraying
dampness seeping
blood engorging
crouch expecting
cock erecting
thighs inviting
fanny tightening
throbbing gently
breathing heavy
heaving upwards
breaking bronco
ringing changes
banging cymbals
linking people
loving simple
Published 10th Mar 2018
| Edited 16th May 2019
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11th Mar 2018 7:49am
Good description of meeting to consummation in pairs of four syllables. Favourite verses:
ringing changes
clanging cymbals (change from the more usual symbol of firing guns!)
linking people
loving simple
ringing changes
clanging cymbals (change from the more usual symbol of firing guns!)
linking people
loving simple
11th Mar 2018 9:41am
I thought changing the ings from the end to he beginning was symbolic from the first stanzas to the later ones
thanks for your comments encouragement for a novice poet
thanks for your comments encouragement for a novice poet
