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so in your haste for the city ..
were I a town, I would be
a ghost town,
left to rot, I would be the home town
you forgot ..
Published 18th Feb 2018
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I enjoyed the metaphorical nature of this Paul. In addition to the literal, there's an undertone of not seeming satisfied with one's lot. Desiring instead the bright lights and neon signs of something bigger.
21st Feb 2018 12:14pm
also the reality of many a country towns, abandoned by the yout(for various reasons) but majority of the times the underpinning reason- the apathy of the ruling elite towards what makes a country, country! succinct, poignant the ink.
22nd Feb 2018 00:21am
23rd Feb 2018 6:39am
you would need planning permission and a risk assessment before changing your uses to that of any kind of town :-p
Huge Like :-)))))
Huge Like :-)))))
