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What I First Saw
I saw it when we first met
Eyes that melt with welcome gaze
A handshake I could not forget
Zeal that set my heart ablaze
The tender empathy he showed
Disarming my vulnerability
Bandaged my sad heart when it flowed
Bleeding out from what was a lonely reality
So now do you see when I say
He seemed so very good for me
And now that I've gotten my way
I know he really is so yummy!
Eyes that melt with welcome gaze
A handshake I could not forget
Zeal that set my heart ablaze
The tender empathy he showed
Disarming my vulnerability
Bandaged my sad heart when it flowed
Bleeding out from what was a lonely reality
So now do you see when I say
He seemed so very good for me
And now that I've gotten my way
I know he really is so yummy!
Published 11th Feb 2018
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11th Feb 2018 10:29pm
True love is based off of how a person treats us and makes us feel. Afterwards, their physical appearance and thus our sexual attraction to them completes the equation.
You adoringly portrayed this balance. Well done!
You adoringly portrayed this balance. Well done!
11th Feb 2018 11:23pm
Thank you! Yes, I didn't first "see" his smoking hot bod... oddly enough. I was in a funny place where that didn't move me like his sweetness could. I was living a stressed out, lonely life, feeling rejected and ignored by those whose approval and company I had craved.
He took my mind out of that place, but it was after marriage, actually, when the passion really came into full bloom.
He took my mind out of that place, but it was after marriage, actually, when the passion really came into full bloom.
14th Feb 2018 6:21am
