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The center of your life
A flower to be seen,
admired, desired.
A jewel to be kept.
I must be the center of your life.
So look at me.
Breath me, feel me.
Enjoy me while you have me.
Want some fun?
Let's play together.
Tell me your dream.
I want to make it real for you.
Are you busy?
"you are desired" you said
I just can't see it.
Am I too demanding?
Shall I go?
Shall I get busy too?
I would found my way indeed
But I don't want that.
I just want to be
the center of your life.
...because you are of mine.
admired, desired.
A jewel to be kept.
I must be the center of your life.
So look at me.
Breath me, feel me.
Enjoy me while you have me.
Want some fun?
Let's play together.
Tell me your dream.
I want to make it real for you.
Are you busy?
"you are desired" you said
I just can't see it.
Am I too demanding?
Shall I go?
Shall I get busy too?
I would found my way indeed
But I don't want that.
I just want to be
the center of your life.
...because you are of mine.
Published 9th Feb 2018
Author's Note
Again friends, help me to make it nicer. Do you feel it fluently? Thank you for your feedback!
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9th Feb 2018 4:42pm
Atenea, That you make your wants, needs, and desires so plain and understandable is beautiful and refreshing. A veces los tios, como yo, somos cabezones en cuanto a los deseos de mujers. Brava!
10th Feb 2018 7:57am
Such a beautiful write
Wish my ex was like this
Well I thought she was
Still a great write
Epic 😊
Wish my ex was like this
Well I thought she was
Still a great write
Epic 😊
Anonymous
12th May 2018 7:56pm
Atenea.. really dig your style.. great write..
Dave
Dave
