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SOLITARY ECSTASY
(A repost)
Tick...tick...tick
the mantle clock
punctuates my solitude
droplets of life
plummeting down the drain
Sitting lost
in the romantic
labyrinth of her poetry
steeped in the sensuality
of each erotic phrase
every syllable
a passionate kiss
words combine
to make palpable
her voluptuous
naked form
soft, smooth skin
undulating breasts
womanly scented
hot -house flower
its sweet taste
lingering on my lips
each petal electrified
by my fingertips
My loins tingle
presage of my inevitable
mammalian growth
with every verb
I am planted deeper inside
magma begins it’s rise
until tick..tick..tick
droplets of me
beat my time
Tick...tick...tick
the mantle clock
punctuates my solitude
droplets of life
plummeting down the drain
Sitting lost
in the romantic
labyrinth of her poetry
steeped in the sensuality
of each erotic phrase
every syllable
a passionate kiss
words combine
to make palpable
her voluptuous
naked form
soft, smooth skin
undulating breasts
womanly scented
hot -house flower
its sweet taste
lingering on my lips
each petal electrified
by my fingertips
My loins tingle
presage of my inevitable
mammalian growth
with every verb
I am planted deeper inside
magma begins it’s rise
until tick..tick..tick
droplets of me
beat my time
Published 8th Feb 2018
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8th Feb 2018 8:32pm
My friend, this is a sensual poem that evokes passion and lust, and manifests it into a physical symptom. I love how the descriptions you've used were erotic, yet not vulgar whatsoever.
Well done!
Well done!
8th Feb 2018 8:56pm
Thank you Luna. Our bodies are fascinating things. How the mere reading of words can excite passion. It's a wonderful, all possessing feeling. I appreciate your kind words!
8th Feb 2018 9:14pm
9th Feb 2018 3:30am
9th Feb 2018 2:37pm
Thank you so much, Sir Crier! I am enthralled by you comment. I have never had my work described this way.
9th Feb 2018 11:48am
it almost feels like making love to poetry inside poetry itself, you are rapidly growing to be my favorite poet
9th Feb 2018 2:34pm
Assasin, I am so happy you enjoy my work. I often ponder exactly where the talent came from...it's rather humbling. Thank you again. Cheer!
Anonymous
9th Feb 2018 7:12pm
Such a lascivious appreciation for the human form through your works with such tenderness.
Luscious ;)
Luscious ;)
9th Feb 2018 7:15pm
There is nothing more magnificent than then, especially,the female form. One of nature's wonders.
Anonymous
11th Feb 2018 4:31am
Mmmmhmm, you are labyrinthine of sensual wonders...
11th Feb 2018 4:51am
I don't know when I've had my work described so beautifully. You encourage me with your awesome support and kind words.
