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Something Broke Inside
when i was a little boy
all my world
was full of joy
we were young
and we were free
we were so blind
we could not see
when your world breaks down
and you've fallen down
woh oh oh oh
woh oh oh oh
something broke
inside
i'm so numb
cant even cry
woh oh oh
woh oh oh
we had our fun
we had our day
we always had
to have our way
with nothing left
to say
we just turn
and walk away
Published 4th Feb 2018
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7th Feb 2018 9:09pm
i know its not a studio recording but i really like this.
the piano is unusual as are the vocals, but in a pleasant way.
i enjoyed your efforts.
the piano is unusual as are the vocals, but in a pleasant way.
i enjoyed your efforts.
8th Feb 2018 1:15am
aye jakyla - this is definitely not a "studio" recording
my studio is an old upright piano in a barn
audio recorder was my samsung phone
used audacity to add a little reverb and give
the vocals a bit of air - otherwise vocals would
be very dry and flat
glad you found this piece pleasant
this was about my 6th or 7th attempt
over the past 6 months - just finally decided -
"wth - just post it - prolly not going to get any better" =P
Thank you for listening and taking the time to comment
ALL the Best
jonni
