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Critical
I work so hard to get to a point of achievement
you talk about my art like it’s something you created
if you think it means, a flying fuck to me
you’re just wasting words
and I’m just writing rhymes
because creativity will beat out ignorance every time
even if what I do sucks
least I tried and failed
but when you don’t give change a chance
you only limit yourself
so take some advice
and open up your mind
It’s time for me to write whatever makes me happy
the hands of ignorance will distort your vision
so if you think I care, just remember this
I don’t give a fuck, I don’t give no shits
and if I ever did, please put me in a grave
life wouldn’t be worth living
if I didn’t fight for everything
I can be different, though I’m happy with that
maybe it’s because I never held myself back
I took in all the love I could
and yes, my heart gets broken
but it is a part of me, I love every moment
people still try to break me down
and they have all the time in the world to try
but I say to them
don’t waste your life on me
because I won’t waste mine
It’s time for me to write whatever makes me happy
the hands of ignorance will distort your vision
so if you think I care, just remember this
I don’t give a fuck, I don’t give no shits
and if I ever did, please put me in a grave
life wouldn’t be worth living
if I didn’t fight for everything
something I don’t understand
If you don’t like someones art
then just move on
why be a hater?
everyone who's a hater is a fucking bitch
no one is forcing you to like anything
why bring your negativity into someone’s happiness?
harsh criticism and being a dick are two different things
so do everyone a favor and keep your opinion to yourself
no matter what is said or done
I will never write for someone else’s vision
giving into pressure isn’t my intention
if it’s for you, then work it
if it’s for you, then kill it
you talk about my art like it’s something you created
if you think it means, a flying fuck to me
you’re just wasting words
and I’m just writing rhymes
because creativity will beat out ignorance every time
even if what I do sucks
least I tried and failed
but when you don’t give change a chance
you only limit yourself
so take some advice
and open up your mind
It’s time for me to write whatever makes me happy
the hands of ignorance will distort your vision
so if you think I care, just remember this
I don’t give a fuck, I don’t give no shits
and if I ever did, please put me in a grave
life wouldn’t be worth living
if I didn’t fight for everything
I can be different, though I’m happy with that
maybe it’s because I never held myself back
I took in all the love I could
and yes, my heart gets broken
but it is a part of me, I love every moment
people still try to break me down
and they have all the time in the world to try
but I say to them
don’t waste your life on me
because I won’t waste mine
It’s time for me to write whatever makes me happy
the hands of ignorance will distort your vision
so if you think I care, just remember this
I don’t give a fuck, I don’t give no shits
and if I ever did, please put me in a grave
life wouldn’t be worth living
if I didn’t fight for everything
something I don’t understand
If you don’t like someones art
then just move on
why be a hater?
everyone who's a hater is a fucking bitch
no one is forcing you to like anything
why bring your negativity into someone’s happiness?
harsh criticism and being a dick are two different things
so do everyone a favor and keep your opinion to yourself
no matter what is said or done
I will never write for someone else’s vision
giving into pressure isn’t my intention
if it’s for you, then work it
if it’s for you, then kill it
Published 3rd Feb 2018
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