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Will you take it?
I won't be shy this time.
So yes, I am addicted to sex
I am addicted to you
Can you handle it?
You suggested it once, I said no.
But we agreed to be honest,
no need to deny
I want you all the time.
Your invisible hands
play with me everyday.
I arch my back, I gasp, I moan
my body shudders. You are here.
And I don't want to quit
You are mine. I will absorb you
And you will consume me.
We will melt, we might vanish.
Is this love that burns inside
a fire, impossible to stop.
And I don't want it ever to change.
This is me. Will you take it?
So yes, I am addicted to sex
I am addicted to you
Can you handle it?
You suggested it once, I said no.
But we agreed to be honest,
no need to deny
I want you all the time.
Your invisible hands
play with me everyday.
I arch my back, I gasp, I moan
my body shudders. You are here.
And I don't want to quit
You are mine. I will absorb you
And you will consume me.
We will melt, we might vanish.
Is this love that burns inside
a fire, impossible to stop.
And I don't want it ever to change.
This is me. Will you take it?
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Re. Will you take it
1st Feb 2018 8:31pm
A lovely offering. The object of you affection will be greatful for your sentiment. It read well. 🙂
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Re: Re. Will you take it
1st Feb 2018 8:42pm
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- Edited 13th Sep 2022 5:45pm
2nd Feb 2018 5:34am
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Re. Will you take it
2nd Feb 2018 10:57pm
"Will u take it?" That's a very bold n inviting statement...can't imagine a real man saying no thank u...
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Re: Re. Will you take it
3rd Feb 2018 10:54pm
Re. Will you take it
Muy romantico. Nos compartimos la misma obsesion, sabes? Gracias por haber compartido tu talento. Brava!
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Re: Re. Will you take it
9th Feb 2018 3:23pm
Re. Will you take it
6th Feb 2018 10:13am
inviting
even oldies may wink
welcome -ing to dup
ur first one is so
deep
let it seep
even oldies may wink
welcome -ing to dup
ur first one is so
deep
let it seep
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Re: Re. Will you take it
9th Feb 2018 3:25pm
Thank you for such a nice comment! Very encouraging to keep expressing my self.
Have a nice day!
Have a nice day!
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
9th Feb 2018 3:53pm
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Re. Will you take it?
9th Feb 2018 5:06pm
Re. Will you take it?
Anonymous
12th May 2018 7:53pm
Atenea.. i really love this.. a brilliant write.. into my reading list it goes.. thanks so much for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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Re. Will you take it?
12th May 2018 10:46pm
men are like cells they call EVERREADY
TRYING to be steady
and are for ever waiting for such an open invitation---- no fool can ever shun
why resort to masturbashun
when sex is simply lovelyiest of lovely FUN
fun with a woman
out in the open
be it Switzerland or Netherlan s or Germany Paris Tokyo
any place any country
all men for ever remain hungry
for the juices they love to seep
and women weep
cummmmmm now let all of it be fully in
and every where women
now openly say
Tommy Jimmy Blighme
cummmmm fuck me
TRYING to be steady
and are for ever waiting for such an open invitation---- no fool can ever shun
why resort to masturbashun
when sex is simply lovelyiest of lovely FUN
fun with a woman
out in the open
be it Switzerland or Netherlan s or Germany Paris Tokyo
any place any country
all men for ever remain hungry
for the juices they love to seep
and women weep
cummmmmm now let all of it be fully in
and every where women
now openly say
Tommy Jimmy Blighme
cummmmm fuck me
0