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I heart
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An app so simple but beneath my thumb I tremble. A tell tale heart of two different worlds drawn far apart. I made a choice that everyone won’t hear. That whisper lingers near and I see the people’s snear. “You’ll go to hell!” I know the retort and Ive already been there if that’s some last consort. My heart begs to feel another’s beat even if it doesn’t fit so neat. If pain could only lift me one more time against defeat I would hope to meet.. you.
An app so simple but beneath my thumb I tremble. A tell tale heart of two different worlds drawn far apart. I made a choice that everyone won’t hear. That whisper lingers near and I see the people’s snear. “You’ll go to hell!” I know the retort and Ive already been there if that’s some last consort. My heart begs to feel another’s beat even if it doesn’t fit so neat. If pain could only lift me one more time against defeat I would hope to meet.. you.
Published 30th Jan 2018
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30th Jan 2018 7:21pm
30th Jan 2018 10:10pm
A short, but effective and dramatic portrayal of the despair one feels when seeking the closeness of another. I especially loved this line: "My heart begs to feel another’s beat even if it doesn’t fit so neat." Well done!
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31st Jan 2018 1:20am
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31st Jan 2018 3:34am
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