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Go- Stop

� � �All �things were set in Motion
Exquisite mess of Emotion

� � � �Suddenly it all stops
Abruptly it comes to halt

Self induced mess
Self inflicted....

� � � �Ripples will echo

if

� �Stirred

Written by Pale_Black

Published 9th Jan 2018

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Re. Go- Stop

samael (Zaroff poetry)

9th Jan 2018 8:37pm

I like this write.
it's got a cool structure
and emotions are an exquisite mess
it's like an acquired taste, kind of like eating monkey brains in that one indiana jones movie...except i'll pass on that lol.

i like the echoing ripples as well.

good write Pale_Black keep'em coming.