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Away
My love is locked behind those walls with you
Caged
Bound
Cuffed
I dream of the day that you'll come home, and pray you'll be the same
Loving
Caring
Sexually insane
Baby hold my heart and know it is all yours
Delicate
Longing
Full
You're everything I've ever needed
Pleasure
Heat
Fuel
Caged
Bound
Cuffed
I dream of the day that you'll come home, and pray you'll be the same
Loving
Caring
Sexually insane
Baby hold my heart and know it is all yours
Delicate
Longing
Full
You're everything I've ever needed
Pleasure
Heat
Fuel
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Re. Away
6th Jan 2018 10:21pm
loved your form...strong emotional resonance...XLENT read for rainy afternoon
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Re: Re. Away
7th Jan 2018 6:25pm
Dearest BC,
Doesn't the rain always bring something out in us? I know it does for me.
Thank you!
XO
Brandie
Doesn't the rain always bring something out in us? I know it does for me.
Thank you!
XO
Brandie
Re. Away
6th Jan 2018 10:50pm
You had me from the photo, and it just went up from there . Loved the sentiment, rhythm, and flow.
Well penned my dear
~Wicked
Well penned my dear
~Wicked
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Re: Re. Away
Knowing you dear Wicked it had to be the cuffs that caught your eye 😋
Thank you so much reading
XO
Brandie
Thank you so much reading
XO
Brandie
Re: Re. Away
7th Jan 2018 7:03pm
Lol !!!’ The cuffs did catch my eye, but the substance of your ink is why I continuesd to read
~Wicked
~Wicked
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Re: Re. Away
7th Jan 2018 7:10pm
Re. Away
....so passionate, tinged with melancholy. Words that make one wish for the day, the emotion......the desires of a woman who loves. What was your motivation for this ink? Very emotive. It certainly moved me 😊
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Re: Re. Away
7th Jan 2018 6:34pm
My dear Mr M 💋
You know I like mystery, and hidden meanings...
"If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be. And what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?"
Thank you for reading my dearest
XOXO
Brandie
You know I like mystery, and hidden meanings...
"If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be. And what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?"
Thank you for reading my dearest
XOXO
Brandie
Re. Away
7th Jan 2018 8:20am
Heart firing read for whoever it is addressed to. New one on me - coming home, among other things, "sexually insane"! Cue passionate reunion!
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Re: Re. Away
7th Jan 2018 6:36pm
Dearest Solomon,
A very passionate reunion indeed if only in my dreams..
Thank you for reading!
XO
Brandie
A very passionate reunion indeed if only in my dreams..
Thank you for reading!
XO
Brandie
Re. Away
8th Jan 2018 1:47am
Re: Re. Away
8th Jan 2018 1:52am
thank you Dean
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!
XO
Brandie
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!
XO
Brandie