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Musky Dusks
My toe won't quit
twitching;
the tempo
of magnesium lows
Harlem ditty
inner city
blues
patting
beneath linted
throes
of blanket throws
How vogue could
one be...
when their body parts
run rogue?
But your kiss
climbed,
in soft lines
up a portion
not half
an hour ago
~
Avalanche Sharks pace
"Corny-stick-up-her-butt-FACE"
B-rate
nobody-wants-on-their-birthday
budget-less
blonde ladies
& their labored
shabby showcasings
Trite
screaming
sprays
through
our off-brand
LCD
Russian waterfalls
unmeasured rations
like Soviet sauces
gloss my good senses
You drain plastic
pints;
An abundant aggressor
Published 23rd Dec 2017
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24th Dec 2017 5:13pm
Twitching tempos
Harlem ditty in the inner city
blanket throws
body parts running rogue
....there's just too much cool stuff not to like
and for this i'm taking it home with me.
quick question ....does this rag smell like chloroform?
well penned AtoMik.
i wish you, one of my best poet friends, a very merry Christmas.
Harlem ditty in the inner city
blanket throws
body parts running rogue
....there's just too much cool stuff not to like
and for this i'm taking it home with me.
quick question ....does this rag smell like chloroform?
well penned AtoMik.
i wish you, one of my best poet friends, a very merry Christmas.
24th Dec 2017 6:12pm
Thank you so much man, you and yours as well! I hope for cheer, and warmth...or at least a crisp snowfall :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2017 8:39pm
27th Dec 2017 1:30pm
If Bob Dylan was a 21st century poets he'd written something like this, very fresh, alive but not beetnick. Truly enjoyed this
27th Dec 2017 10:18pm
Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 8:41pm
Dually noted, regardless still an outstanding piece i enjoyed. I'm trying to find my way into up tempo occasions from here to there. I say I rather live them than write them but fuck ain't even doing that so might as well guide myself to it
Wait, what the fuck!? I meant to say "Thank you man", not "as a man". My autocorrect is stoned. I'm a of the XX chromosomal variety.
*Although, I have had my share of nasty comments from conservative sorts about looking too tomboyish because of my hair.
It's funny, I'm leaving it 😆
*Although, I have had my share of nasty comments from conservative sorts about looking too tomboyish because of my hair.
It's funny, I'm leaving it 😆
Anonymous
30th Dec 2017 4:28am
Ah either way I dig what you do, I know the a.c. b.s. well
