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A Bodice Of Bandages
The bonework encases
ribs in our ribs
crosshatching customs
bindings over bedridden bosoms
ladders leading to bowels
& worse yet...
to skidrow sentiments
Clinching over carcinomas
tightlacing
cinching blistering inches
to spare with baleen braces
the gaping of our
self-sliced
stomas
ribs in our ribs
crosshatching customs
bindings over bedridden bosoms
ladders leading to bowels
& worse yet...
to skidrow sentiments
Clinching over carcinomas
tightlacing
cinching blistering inches
to spare with baleen braces
the gaping of our
self-sliced
stomas
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21st Dec 2017 3:10am
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Re. A Bodice Of Bandages
21st Dec 2017 3:45am
"self sliced stomas" ----- I dunno wha'to say anymo'.....bligh me!
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21st Dec 2017 4:12am
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2017 12:27pm
Such unique word play.
Well done
Well done
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21st Dec 2017 10:31pm
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2017 11:51pm
Dé Nada
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Re. A Bodice Of Bandages
21st Dec 2017 10:43pm
beautiful Atomik
such dark emotions
& thoughts evoked
while reading this..
so stark & dismal..
"bindings over bedridden bosoms
ladders leading to bowels
& worse yet...
to skidrow sentiments"
brava dearest poetss..
a grim setting
& masterful write..
love Crim
such dark emotions
& thoughts evoked
while reading this..
so stark & dismal..
"bindings over bedridden bosoms
ladders leading to bowels
& worse yet...
to skidrow sentiments"
brava dearest poetss..
a grim setting
& masterful write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. A Bodice Of Bandages
21st Dec 2017 10:46pm
Re: Re. A Bodice Of Bandages
21st Dec 2017 10:47pm
it is indeed dearest poetess
you captured its essence
so perfectly in this write..
love Crim
you captured its essence
so perfectly in this write..
love Crim
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Re. A Bodice Of Bandages
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2017 6:11am
Haunting! Brilliant graveyard of words
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22nd Dec 2017 6:26am