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An Imperfect Shakespheare...
Although, Time
stills for none...
One must wonder
plunderin' within
these emotions
swirl me under...
Will thou giveth
of thee, one heartfelt
moment in mine...?
Cover, the embattled scars
marred by a battered see
Sayeth...
Doth thou covet me
as assuredly as one does thee?
Whilst thou cover me...
Thine might, a once broken
light-soul...a hole in
heart, tethered to thee
now shredded, apart...
As a myriad of mystic forces
courses thee expressed mind vyin'
to adhere to the warmth
assured by love's bind...
Whilst thou giveth
of thee, a simple fraction
a second, or one mere
moment in mine?
Published 19th Dec 2017
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19th Dec 2017 2:35pm
19th Dec 2017 7:01pm
Anonymous
19th Dec 2017 8:08pm
Time given for a moment like this is time well spent...
Perfect <3
Perfect <3
20th Dec 2017 00:32am
Yea, I'm sure you're right n I thank you so much for the RL add n all the sweet words n support always :)
19th Dec 2017 11:00pm
Of course I will!
This time to your wonderful Shakespearean work..
I am a fool fore these wonders..
Very beautiful dear poetikness
<3
H
This time to your wonderful Shakespearean work..
I am a fool fore these wonders..
Very beautiful dear poetikness
<3
H
20th Dec 2017 00:50am
But see, I'm not really good at talking like Shakesphere but I
Flattered you thought so n truly appreciate your support my friend :), also honored for the RL add :)
Flattered you thought so n truly appreciate your support my friend :), also honored for the RL add :)
20th Dec 2017 00:05am
Electric read, Poetikmind, you are truly one of a kind. You suggest that of which you reference but I have no idea (that's how dumb I am). It's a stand alone piece and a fabulous write. Congratulations.
20th Dec 2017 1:28am
I'm deeply humbled by your very kind praise, n truly appreciate it as well :)
20th Dec 2017 5:32am
Very Shakespheareian, and the message conveyed
read clear until the last few lines became blurry
due to the wetness in my eyes.
Not sure if it was the poem or onion on
brat I was eating as both were affecting :-)))))
Seriously, nicely done Poe.
Probably better than "Willy Shake"
tryin' to write in urban slang. lol
read clear until the last few lines became blurry
due to the wetness in my eyes.
Not sure if it was the poem or onion on
brat I was eating as both were affecting :-)))))
Seriously, nicely done Poe.
Probably better than "Willy Shake"
tryin' to write in urban slang. lol
20th Dec 2017 1:15pm
LMAO at Willy Shake lol n his attempt at urban slang... hey? U just might be right! Lol...thank u so much sweetie I'm honored n truly grateful always :)
20th Dec 2017 12:25pm
Time is the most precious gift someone can give another. ⌚
This encapsulates the emotion of that, PoetikOne.
This encapsulates the emotion of that, PoetikOne.
20th Dec 2017 1:54pm
Yes, it is n I'm of a mind to appreciate as much as I'm given... thank u my sweetheart, truly n always :)
Anonymous
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26th Dec 2017 11:57pm
Thou loveth this comment to the depths of thine heart milady!! lol
Truly, appreciate you sweetness :)
Truly, appreciate you sweetness :)
Anonymous
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